Graveyard of Lost Souls
69For those of you who believe in or have actually had an up close and personal experience with a ghostly figure, I hope you will appreciate this piece of poetry. I had such a sighting a few years back when I was driving through the night to get to my destination. It was in a town in Kentucky, a town name I can’t remember. The sighting haunts me to this very day,not in a scary way but with sadness for the lady in white who wanders that road and cemetery. Up till then I had never had a paranormal experience, however it made me a firm believer from that night forward.
Lady In White
Why did she appear to
me in the early morning light
staring from a distance with her
reflection looking back at her.
I saw her through my looking glass
a floating spirit restless as
the night and grey shadows
of reflective sorrows and pain.
Her sad expressions so deep
her eyes as black as night
in a flowing gown of white
she appeared like a broken
timepiece stuck at midnight.
Was she a lost child of the past
speaking to me through closed lips
wanting to reach me somehow
and feel my eyes looking back
at her and be not fearful
but understand who she was.
Someone who once lived amongst
the living filled with dreams and
hopes and promises of loves expression
now she lingers for awhile in solitude
along the road of loneliness and despair
reaching out in some small way for someone
to stop awhile and not be frightened of her
presence there but instead look back and
touch her lost soul and light a little flame
of hope for her to return to the resting place.
In that private place of darkness and mold
amongst the dead who walk forever in
the mist and graveyards of lost souls.
© Copyright 2012 by Vincent Moore. All rights reserved
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Wonderful Poem Vincent.
I had an experience in a very old hotel in Alruras, Ca. many years ago. I was in a room on the third floor and had just gone to bed, when I felt the bed collapse a little as if another person had gotten in with me. I rolled over only to find myself bumping into an "Invisible" body. I went down and told the lady that runs the hotel, and she told me that must have been the old woman that owned the hotel and had died there.
I too am a believer.
Voted up and awesome. I am a true believer and I have seen and heard astounding things. These spirits fascinate me and I bet your lady in white has one interesting story to tell. Thanks you for sharing. Wonderfully haunting poem.
This is really great, enchanting, haunting and captivating poem! I wonder what I would have felt if I had such an encounter. It is kind of scary and overwhelming!
Well-written. Well-stressed. I've noticed some perfect editing in here.
Dear Vincent, this is the sadness of death ---- "Someone who once lived amongst the living filled with dreams and hopes and promises of loves expression now she lingers...."
Life is so precious! We have but only a couple of years to enjoy what it offers - to look beyond the bad to the good. I see life very much like a glass filled with beer, but badly poured. You've got to go through 3/4 bitter foam to taste the pure, bitter, refreshing sweetness.
I've got some catching up to do in your corner. Will do asap.
PS: Have you noticed how much we have grown here at the hubs?
I wonder why these souls are so lost. You have described her searching, her loneliness so perfectly. When I read your words, I could see her there and I wondered… does she know? Oh, if they don’t, how deeply pitiful and sad…it brings such tears. Beautiful, Vincent, as always.
I wonder what i would do if something like this ever happened to me, sometimes I wish it would. My Grandmother was a firm believer in STATIONS where people went when they died before entering heaven, strange, I haven't a clue, but i'm open to all beliefs..Thank you my good friend Ken..
Society consists of individuals that are destined to penetrate the veils and realize their immortal existence in Creation. Vincent, I believe your encounter with the Lady in White was no random accident but was meant to be. Due to our experiences in this material life we both know the spirit within in us is much more real than the physical body. And Vincent, I also believe the Lady in White was searching for an answer of her own- one that you supplied her my friend. We have very few illusions left to us, you and I, and that's a beautiful thing.
PS- putting a link to this on the new story if that's alright and up and all the button bones 'cept the funny one.
The honor is all mine Vincent. The plan is to make your writings a habit. Nolo reply is needed here my friend.
Hi Ken I am pleased you published this again. Such a hauntingly beautiful piece of work and delighted to read it once more. I believe this lady in white has a connection to you, somewhere in this universe and our ever looping existance you knew her I am sure.
I have already read 'Lost kentucky Love' and came straight here to comment first.
Definitely has my thumbs up
I don't see her as a lost soul. I think she heard you were going to be in town and just came out to meet you. Well written, between you and Alastar; I now have to question my whole stance on aberrations.
HI Vincent! Soulful piece of poetry.. needless to say! I was not a believer until I was fifteen years old and had an experience which shook me to the core...
I do not remember those fifteen minutes of my life... All I remember Is blankness and then after my mother slapping me right in the face.. and my whole neighborhood up on the terrace where I lay pale and lost..
I had been taken over by a ghost for fifteen minutes... and I don't remember what I did... My friends tell me that I knocked on the doors of a closed flat where a murder had taken place recently... and begged for water..
The incident haunts me till today... but some where it essays the pain and sadness of the lost soul.. the ghost as he might be called... The loneliness and longing for his family and loved ones... the exquisiteness of life grabbed away from them
You have captured that in your poem in the most beautiful poetic fashion any one could
Hat's off
Vincent, I am "gob smacked" at hearing of this encounter of yours. Is it altogether a coincidence that you have written a beautiful poem to preserve the memory of this mysterious apparition. Could it be, that she purposefully chose to appear before you knowing that you could give her the validation she may not have had on earth. Here you are, a poet who has now given life and form to her existence albeit she is no longer on our physical plane. If this was her wish then you have accomplished it well in this beautiful poem.



















anupma 2 weeks ago
Nice poem! Souls are immortal.