Clay in our Hands
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My first two published books of Poetry
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Our bodies touch I feel
your heat on my chest
and your scent arrest's
me in a state of excitement
my hands slowly move around
your waist and brush against
your hips ever so slowly
spinning me in a dizzy
captivating haze while
the wheel spins before us.
We are in sync as the
potter's wheel spins
ever so slowly and
our hands shape with
every slow turn while
the softness of the clay
on our fingertips moves
up to the palms of our
hands where we sweat
with every twist and turn
and rub of each other's
sensuality.
The creation before us
is only offset by your
soft caress as my chin
rest's on your neck
I feel the pulse of your
life under it and become
excited by every beat
of your heart on mine
as it pulsates against
the heavenly oily scent
that radiates pearls of
sweat down the nape
of your neck teasing
my hot breath there
making it dance
I scream for more.
Just as the most peaceful
still water can change it's
reflection or the simplest
hum of a hummingbird can
stir excitement we as young
lovers together like this can
reflect our soft skin on each
other and be bathed
and colored by a simple
mould of clay in each
others hands.
As we dance silently lifting
rubbing and shaping our
lives are entwined in lust
for our art as we are lost
in this labyrinth of sensations
we continue to rest our hand
on that hard roundness
shaping it to our desire.
Let us slide down the
thin passageway of time
as we drift and dream in
each others arms touching
deep with our fingertips
as we explore what lays
before us on this wheel
of time.
Let us drink our love
for one another in this
bliss of molded clay
as the water thickens
before us and turns
to wine to caress our
lips and quench our
lustful desire for each
other this night in
front of the wheel.
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So emotionally disturbed...Have to have some wine my friend! You are the mamadrama male counterpart. Lol! Imagination flies going down the circling clay that embrace both hands...like stimulating all the forbidden senses...Thanks Vincent, Your creativity is reaching the top by the day..and night!
LORD/ Cheers!
I don't know why both your comments have not appeared. They have been approved by me. LoL
Beautiful! You pulled my tears with this one, Vincent, or maybe the music did. When I was young(er), I did not really appreciate, in fact I did not even feel the warmth and strength of my lover's body with the tip of my fingers and the palms of my hands. And nowadays my hands are surely the most 'hungry' limbs/organs in my entire body.
This phrase of yours is a stunner:
'...lost in this labyrinth of sensations...'
Voted up and awesome!
..that was very, very good....
I want to mold clay with you! Now you have me lusting and yearning to mold clay and have the thingy spin and the clay in my hands as I lean back on a hard chest with his chin brushing my neck. His hot breath on my neck sends electric bolts up and down my spine. My mind is in a cloud. Now you make me want to write poetry about molding clay!
I feel it's getting a little warm in here, actually HOT!
Ghost is one of my favorite movies and I remember the first time seeing it I wanted to go out and buy a wheel.
I think we need a hot button to push, but instead I'll just push all the others ones.
That movie stays with me because of its powerful love, and the scene you have chosen is one of my favorites. You words blend and weave in and out of that scene so well. You words brought more feeling to a powerful love scene that has been indelibly etched into my soul.Wow!
@Poohgranma This movie has never left my thoughts and returns from time to again. They were both excellent performers. This is just one scene of many I loved. Yes indeed God rest his soul, Patrick was a gift to us for awhile.
@lord de cross Heck thanks for the compliments, I am simply in the mood as I sipped my red. I don't really know what came over me:-) mamadrama I am not, she holds that title of Erotica Queen. LoL thank you for your kind words as always.
@Martie, you are one of the people I knew would possibly enjoy this. Pulling tears I never mean to do that my friend. You are not alone with those feelings from the past. We humans all yearn for the "touch" we need it in our short lives here to help us get through each day. LOVE and TOUCH are partners. Hugs
@SomewayOuttaHere, good of you to say that.
@Cardisa I know you have strong and tender man in your life, just close your eyes and know that he is behind you, wrapped into your loving soul and you will feel this experience I share here. Now go mold some clay with your man. Hugs.
@Just Ask Susan Thank you my sweet friend for feeling the heat and being prompted to push all my buttons, much appreciated. Now go out and buy that wheel, it's never to late to get your hands working in clay.
@homesteadbound. Yes it haunts me still today as being one of those movies that live with us. We feel their emotions, tenderness, love for each other. The Power of LOVE is so exciting, stimulating and needed in our lives. This is one of those powerful love scenes for sure.
Molding clay has never been so alluring before, but after reading your poetry, I see and feel it in a new light, oozing with the prospect of a beautiful piece of art and a sensual togetherness. Very beautiful...Bravo
Scorching hot poem that plays beautifully off one of my favorite movie scenes of all time. Bravo! This was a sensuous treat. Absolutely loved it.
Voted up to the heavens.
Oh, my, my! This is steamy, hot. I like the sensual nature without it being too over the top erotic. The juxtaposition of such a mundane act and the sensual nature of the two sharing it shows just how heat can be generated anywhere when the chemistry is right. Excellent!
You're making us see clay in a sensous light. Love your beautiful sexy poem. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.
Whoa, Vincent, a gal could be putty in your hands if you keep this writing up... earthy, sensuous and oh so lovely!
Voted UP and Awesome and Beautiful! Off to have a sip of seltzer water. Hugs, mar.
I've molded clay. It IS sensuous; - earthy, - responsive, - ah, yes - as are potters.
"Let us slide down the
thin passageway of time
as we drift and dream. . . ."
@always exploring Thank you for reading this piece my friend. I have never worked with it but have felt it and yes indeed it would be alluring and sensous to work with, especially the way this couple are.
@Happyboomernurse Thank you as well for your kind words and happy you found it a treat it was one of their best scenes.
@poetvix Yes it's clean not over the topic erotic. Very sensual indeed and between two lovers like this why not? they are expressing their art in both ways. Chemistry between the two right people always is excellent.
@writer20 You will never be able not to see clay in any other way now:-)) thanks for the vote UP
@marcoujour Nah I've been putty in theirs:-) I just took the potter's wheel and made it what it is romantic and with these two stars is sizzled. Sip of seltzer water. LoL
@Nellieanna. Yes I can see you molding clay for some reason:-) Sensous indeed, earthy and responsive to the touch. Potters are sensul, mostly likey they have to be to create what they do like most artist's are. Thank you my dear for your valuable comment as always.
Well . . . that was hot!!
wow... write more., that was so awesome and HOT!! OH MY... I need a glass of wine after that one.. LOL
WONDERFUL POEM
VOTE WAY WAY UP
DEBBIE
oh, how lovely Vincent...who could forget this wonderful movie?an all time favorite?titillating...
That's so, Ken. My potter friends prided themselves on the fact that their art - so incredibly beautiful - was made to be USED, rather than just seen. In fact, pottery stirs so many of one's senses! I've so much love and respect for it. It seems to reach down below the surface and stir almost primordial feelings! (and so do poems about it - obviously!)
George and I loved "Ghost" too. Your poem is just wonderful.
What a perfect, sensual poem, Vincent, and what an outstanding perfect photo you chose to illustrate it. Your poetic words appropriatelty enhance my fond memories of that film. Thank you.
WOW! I am speechless! There is so much for me to learn from you here. Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it! :)
And Here I was thinking that there was no way that the clay scene from ghost could have been any better, I was wrong.
This was a beautiful enthralling poem filled to the brim with erotic, sensous emotion that turned the temperature up
So very very well done
Vincent! This poem imbues one with a degree of sensuality and, ultimately, a sense of purpose. Your poem renews for me the beauty of that movie.
Voted up, up and away!
Wow! What wonderful poetry combined with such sensuality. Beautiful.
Oh my God Ken, that's sooo sensual. Beautiful words, written like the pro that you are. My favorite movie as well. Great welcome home to me, I may dream of a SWAIN.
Vote up +
Kay
Sensual, seductive and romantic! You really create the mood... Lovely.. I am not saying anything more! Have a blessed day! Peace!
Vincent Moore - that is certainly an incredible scene. Ghost was highly romantic and sensual. Ghost is the perfect inspiration for the words you have graced us with in, Clay in our Hands.
Your words here have certainly moved and warmed me. I felt the heat, the breath and the strength of a passionate man seated behind me. The longing for more has certainly awakened my senses to the desires you have illustrated here. This is an incredibly seductive and alluring piece. You always manage to take me into the scenery - I love that!
Although you always feed me just enough - I will always long for more Moore :)
Very sensual and visually stimulating poem. I love it.
Wow, incredible imagery and emotions you have created with your words. Thanks for sharing such sensuality, I had forgotten how cool that scene was.
Well that was lovely. It had great imagery and flowed nicely. Upon the first read I found it possesses good rhythm and excellent use of enjambment to keep the reader rolling to the next line. I can't help but feel though that this would perform better as a prose piece. It is a good poems so please don't misunderstand my efforts at critiquing.
Hot stuff, Vincent! Ghost is one of my favorite classic movies, too. Voted up and awesome!
Well done. Thoughts weaved gently portraying more than a picture. Remembering the blend of Eros and his chosen maiden while reading, the harmony of this song played.
Reading this, I turn to putty. Wow.. This is one of your most powerful voices. Well done!
Bow chic a wow wow, hot stuff indeed!
Very sensual and erotic. Well done Vincent! I always liked that movie, and this poem is perfect to illustrate the feelings they portrayed.
My favourite movie of all time and this scene full of sensuallity and romance and now enhanced with the words of your poem. How could it get any better :)
Most definitely sizzling, there should be a 'hot' button
A Beautiful Erotic Poem that Flowed so Sensually Vincent. Yes, I too Loved that Movie and now with Patrick Swayze gone before his time, it's become even more Poignant.
Sensual and delightful and just sweeps you up and away! I love your poetry and I am guilty of not reading enough of your amazing writing, Vincent! Yup, I loved Ghost the movie and it's one of my favorites.
Voted and pinned!
Wow Vincent ~ this is absolutely breathtaking. The entire package with photo and video and the flow of your gentle words is truly beautiful.
I can add but one thought , all covered above me here , wow ! nothing missing here ,Perhaps just the softest scent of perfume ! You know Vincent not enough women wear perfume ! Or do pottery in front of me !lol......be well my friend .I hit all the buttons.
@Bella Nina Thank you for your Hot words.
@Deborah Brooks Thank you for the vote way up, wine indeed, I tip my glass and toast to HOT
@raciniwa Yes indeed not a movie to be forgotten for sure and indeed very titillating in many ways.
@Nellieanna Yes indeed it does stir those primordial feelings, the poems as well. Something about getting ones hands wet and slippery, gives off a sensation even more so when one has Demi Moore sitting in front of them:-) Patrick was a lucky man and so was she, two beautifully pretty and handsome stars to embrace each other in clay.
@drbj Thank you for your words doc. These two may have to see a doctor after their frolicking in clay. LoL
@kittyjj Thank you for your speechless comment. I am happy that you enjoy this share of clay and two lovers.
@nighthag. I think this may help you stay awake at night as I know you are a nighthawk, you often scribe in the wee hours as do I and many other poets. Glad you enjoyed this piece, I hope your temperature has dropped by now:-)
@Dim Thank you for your beautiful comment.
@KDee I am happy that my words stirred some fond memories inside of you. Your very welcome indeed.
@shimmering Dawn I am not saying anything more? lol then I can only imagine that the heat went up at your end and you couldn't catch your breath. LoL Thank you for your lovely comment, peace and blessings to you my poetic friend.
Oh yes, this one brings back memories of when I use to work closely with the ladies in the old pottery shop. Those days are behind me now and my time at the wheel has been rescinded...But the feel of wet clay lingers on my heart. Good write...very passionate! WB
very poetic and really magicall in views..i found very new and original idea of writing rythemiscally in your hubs
Such a sensual scene in the film that you have captured here in this poem, Oh somebody please give me some clay! lol! wonderful!
@WayneBrown For some reason I can't seem to place you behind the wheel in a pottery shop with the ladies, unless you had your guitar slung over your shoulder and your intentions were to play a song or two while they shaped the clay:-) I am happy to read though that the wet clay lingers in your heart still.Did you supply the water for their wheels? I bet you did..lol
@moneycop thank you for your observation and keen words.
@Nell Rose I have a box of clay ready to ship, do you want a Patrick sent with it? LoL thanks for the read, glad you liked my piece.
Oh my gosh Vincent, my heart beats like a jungle drum and my mind is in a complete fog. . .now it's my turn to hit the cold shower!
Ha, ha Ms SanneL a pay back for that Bergman video you tantalized me with. You also had more than my heart beating like your jungle drum, need I say more:-0 Yes the cold shower is certainly a temporary reprieve. Enjoy it and come back for more.
Yes please! lol!
Sorry I’m late in commenting, but I’ve been besieged with work lately with not much time for anything else. It has occupied my thoughts too much, so I was so pleased to read this wonderful poem. It is a sensual banquet that sweeps over the mind and lingers with a delicious and rhythmic tenacity that is irresistible. As the French would say, “OOOO la la!” Or, “Ce poème est un plaisir doux et sensuel. Merci, cher poète.” :-)
I understand how work can draw us away from many pleasures and I know one of your great pleasures is writing. Thank you for thinking of me and coming here for a read of this piece. Merci beaucoupe madmoiselle. Ces't mon plaisir. OOOla la et correct. Au revoir and I always await your return. Glad you enjoyed my work in clay. Hugs
I'm always in love with your word pictures. This is sonorous, beautiful, magical...
Welcome Vinaya nice to see you here again and I treasure your comments. Like the artist you are, you don't spare your beautiful words that you offer up to me your fellow scribe, I am humbled and honored by them and receive them with graciousness.
Amazing Vincent;as all these comments tell us.
You are such a natural writer and create with apparent ease.
Thank you for sharing and inspiring my friend.
I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Eddy.
Thank you Eiddwen, happy you enjoyed this as many others seemed to as well. I wish you a wonderful weekend to. May all your troubles be small ones and your heart shared with all as you do here at the Hubs. Hugs to you sweet friend.
You have the ability to write in a really sensual way that feels classy and interesting to me--I so appreciate that--thanks for livening up my afternoon!
This adds a whole new dimension to the term 'spinning of tales'
@AudreyHowitt I am happy to have livened up your afternoon with my sensuality. I enjoyed this molding of verse permitted me by my Muse. I put the dark shadows away for awhile.
@mckbirdbks Mike glad you got the right spin out of this piece. Thank you for stopping by my friend.
Vincent, I'm back! I just had a sudden urge to become a potter and mold some clay! LOL!
Where are the sensual, hot, and passionate buttons? Wow, I was enthralled by that one!
Sannel, nice to see you come back, I thought you had packed your bags and ran off with the Epigramman:-) Let's mold together and get our hands all wet and sticky.LoL hugs to you sweet friend.
@VictoriaLynn Happy to oblige you Ms Victoria, yes we should have those hot buttons for these steamy scribes:-)
Buying a pottery wheel was the last thing on my mind after watching it...
Somebody open a window!
Very sensual! I know that you draw on your past and depression to pen a significant amount of your poetry. But I believe this side of you, the wanting side, is the one you should work to coax out of the shadows. It's the side that seems to be fighting to be free. Brilliant as always...
Lilleyth, glad you took a spin on the wheel, it's refreshing isn't it, yes indeed it's hot in there. lol
@ A.A. Zavala Thank you for your keen observation, I am rarely depressed although I do draw on my past as a boy growing up in a turbulent home. Coaxing out of my shadows is what my Muse is there for, he stimulates my senses and at times draws on this side of me. I am free however chained to my past. Thank you for your accolade, much appreciated my fine writer.
Poohgranma Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago
What a classic you have chosen as a backdrop for your lovely poem. Several scenes from that movie stay with me and yet are like brand new each time I watch the movie. God rest his soul. Your poem could easily become a classic as well!