Breathing You
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I have taken up the challenge to write a poem of sensual love. Since it takes two to tango I decided to share my passionate moments with a lady of mystery and we took turns expressing our passion in this poem. She definitely has the scent of a woman and the graceful movements on the dance floor. The mystery lady is no other than Alexandra Lucas aka. Silvergenes at the Hubs.
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Come to me my love
My loins are burning for thee
Like hot embers in my hearth
I’ll forget you not as the flame
Flickers in both our hearts.
I cannot see your face,
only feel your breath
upon my soul and my heart
searches the darkness
open to the night rain
like the lilies of Casablanca.
Lust has fallen before us and
the rain is fast approaching
Our hope is renewed and
this night is ours for the taking
each moment spent with you
is better than the last.
You take my breath into your own
and hold my fragrance in your hand
Seeking sweeter, fiercer nectar
I am lost in you.
So let the fire in our souls take
Control and pave the way as
our lust takes sway I long to
have you in the rain once more.
swimming in your dusk and dreams
unlacing where my body ends
and yours begins
my hunger rises.
You come to me naked under
A robe of blue and slowly
I untie the ribbon and watch
your jet black hair flow down
your tender neck.
You tease me with the whisper
of night shadows on my skin
and the rain no longer soft
plays across your chest
drumming through your valleys.
like Tlaloc’s jewels untouched
until my thirst can wait no longer.
with my hands on your shoulders
Pulling you closer to me.
Drinking deep from your wells
lighting fires on your hilltops.
Feeling the motion I have so slowly
Placed between our tender kisses as
The rain soaks and pours on our
Heated bodies in bliss while the
Heavens open up and angels cry
For love of this the kiss that sends
Our bodies a tingling with delight.
Your scent transforms me sweetly
heavy as lava deep within the sea
pouring like honey from secret
caves hidden far below.
We are lost in each other as our
Love thickens and drips like the
Rain falling on hearts of promise.
I feel you tremble like the earth
and tear apart in tender madness
my touch is yours
my mouth is yours
my breath is yours.
We are drawn together two lovers
In the night our touch feeling
Soft and hot I taste your sweet love
For me between your thighs and
Know that I have found my way
Like a ship guided by the light
Im safely docked in your harbour.
© Copyright 2011 by Vincent Moore and Alexandra lucas. All rights reserved
Here are more exciting authors who have dipped into the sensual surf.
A.A. Zavala (Just Tell Me)
Martie Coetser (The Space of Our Love)
The Blue Star (Bring in the Clown)
Mckbirdbks (Can you come and Play)
Must65gt (One Summer Nights Passion)
Rosemay50 (Sweet Temptation)
kallini2010 (Jumping Into the Erotic Wave)
Makusr (Enchantress)
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Have noticed lately that it's getting a little steamy here at HubPages...and I am enjoying it :). Enjoyed your poem!
Good thing it was raining, otherwise the poetry would have run right past the point of ignition and spontaneous combustion would have consumed you both.
Sunshine I'm happy you saw and possibility felt the sensuality, thank you for your votes. hugs
@ JustaskSusan, glad your enjoying it my ex Montreal hottie, it's time for you to step up to the plate and add one of your own, come on girl u can do it:0))
@mckbirdbks, I almost choked on my sip of white wine here with your comment. The engine was revving and combustion occurred. Hey you asked me to join the fray, I did, this is the result.LoL... I couldn't help myself..
Good for you taking up the challenge Ken, we all knew you had it in you being the poet that you are.
This is such a sensual poem, phew makes me wish I was 20 again when I had the energy for repeat perfomances.
Going to the cafe now for a much needed iced tea
Oh my goodness! This one is absolutely awesome. Love the duet. Some breathtaking moments. The title attract from a distance.
Going to sleep on this one for sure.
Mckbirds once again cracked me up!
Thanks for the rest of the links, Saddle. But will read them during the coming week. Poems like this should be read one at a time ;))) and only one per week. We must act our age.
Ken, this piece was truly oustounding. All your works of one of a kind, but you touched on everything that passionate people cherish. The initial breath upon the body, the stirring of loins, the passionate consumation. Done in your style, truly the center piece of all the works. Thank you for sharing with us. Adding link.
...well I just wrote a 'snuff' one - lol lol - but I guess that hardly ranks as 'eroticism' lol lol - but when I come here and see how it's properly done by a master, yet, I do feel like a little punk who needs to get laid - lol -yes sir Mister K - if words embodied the flesh then I would say you are the Hub's ultimate lover.
(or else you're the fifth Beatle)
lake erie time ontario canada 7:10pm
Rosemay, gotta love those repeat performances, I remember them well:-) Your banana hub turned my crank and became the fruit of my loins. It's all your fault you turned this Saddle on to leave his darkness and get organic/exotica.
@Martie What is act our age? when we write like this we let loose girl:0) no age barrier if so, then this old saddle would rust in his saddle. I see you gently resting on your pillow as exotica moments keep waking you up and wanting more:-0) Now catch your breath my sweet angel and go back to sleep, and keep your hands above the blankets...lol...oh how naughty I can be, see what you've all brought out in me...I'm going back to my cave my Muse is disgusted with my behavior..lol
@Saddlerider1: When was This contest of Lyrical Lust and Poetic precociousness initiated My Friend? It appears that lyricists such as William Shakespeare, Celine Dion and Bryan Adams have intruded on Hubpages with these words.
Ken, here I saw you as the Centaur, Chiron, the perfect blend of Horse and Man. Now you sly Satyr, you had me thinking of some rather risque tryst of Don Juan or Cassanova with your offering above. That was just barely this side of safe in the erotic sense.
Now I will be seeing a rather different figure when next I envision the saddlerider1, my friend! LOL! Yes You do indeed have your wild side, Sir! Voted Up! Play nice!!
Regards Mike (Aka Professor M!) ;D
I knew you could write of erotic pleasures. Whew, this one is definitely HOT. I need a fan. You found your Hot button, I see.
(Sounds of heavy breathing and headboard wall-thumping going on here).
Geeze, Talk about S.O.B., CALL A MEDIC......
saddlerider1,
Greetings from MAKUSR. Very artistically you have penned this poem and the way you have presented it is awesome. The heat flows well and the reader is drawn to it.
Lots of Love,
MAKUSR
P.S:- "Enchantress" written by me has escaped from your hall of fame!
Thank you makusr for your stimulating comment. There is a lot of heat in many of these erotica hubs. My apology, look again your Enchantress has been added to my hall of fame in this Hub. Your link is there now for all to enjoy. Well written my poetic friend.
saddlerider1,
T H A N K S !!!!!!
Lots of Love,
MAKUSR
P.S:- So kind of you I was indulging in a little banter!
I really loved your poem, new fan :)
wow, let me know if you ever want to ink dance with me, this turned out to be an amazing piece!
Very steamy indeed. There does seem to be a hot theme of poetry this week.
Oh my word Ken, I had to beware that my screen didn't catch fire from the stunning visions portrayed by your poetry. What a ride. Emotional, sensual and darn yet right sexual at the very end, just like love making should be. Well done for joining us all, and teaching us more skills my friend. You have such a dramatic way with poetry that takes us all to the next height, and so I am away to cower until I can join the masters pen once more. Lovely Ken. x
Wow what a masterpiece,very steamy,very sensual and brilliant in every sense.
Your gift is amazing and here's to many more hubs such as this to share on hrer/
Take care and have a great day.
Eiddwen.
Ken, out of the dark into the glow, I saw your posts at Emerald Wells, I knew you could, and dang good as well!
I am impressed,
Blessings
Mi Amigo,
dust
I am instructing everyone I know to beware of people who use the word "loins" outside of the kitchen!
I am off to be with my fiance now. It's raining cats and dogs here and when it rains in Jamaica we get kinda hot! Your poem isn't helping to cool me down one bit.....whew!
Nice touch! It is so good to know you have a passionate side to you, for when I first discovered your work it was in the form of a horror story! You never fail to amaze me!
lovely poem indeed!
Nice - smooth - and very sensual! Great job to the both of you!
...Good early afternoon Mister K from wind swept Lake Erie - my contribution to the erotica challenge is ready for your enquiring eyes - you will not have guessed its subject matter in a thousand years because in typical 'hornee' epi-man style it takes a complete 360 degree turn - and it has 'cancer' in its title.
Sincerely hope all is well with you my friend.
I think I'm up now after night shift sleep and having my first cup of coffee at lake erie time 1:05pm
A.A.Zavala,thank you for encouraging me to give it a try, as you know I am not the most romantic or erotica writer, but it was fun giving it a try. I am amongst more talented poets than I when it comes to these subjects and you my friend started the ball rolling. Thank you for your wonderful piece, you must be so proud of the crowd you have attractive with so many comments. Bravo and congratulations my scribe. Take a bow sir.
My dear Ken, this was so realistic and full of depth and passion. I am really impressed my friend...Now I must run and take a cold shower! lol :-)
Wow Ken! This is hot, hot stuff!
Loved it!
Best wishes MM
My friend Colin, Epigramman. You are full of surprises, although as you say your contribution may not be as erotica as a few of them, believe me when I say this it is just as romantic. It brought a tear to my eye, thinking how two lovers stay loyal, keep their interest for each other no matter what health condition they may be stricken with. You were soft, caring and loving to your mate and you made her feel very much like the woman inside she has always been. Well done my excellent scribe, You knocked this one out of the Hub park, bravo.
AKA Prof Mike, I had a wild side when I was much younger, yet tamed over years. A romantic, sensual, erotic piece did come forth I must agree. Not often is this stirred in me, but it was nice to close my eyes, envision what I wrote and it came out just as I wanted it to. Thank you my friend for the kind compliments. I know you would knock one right out of the park, please favor us with your talented pen my friend. I would love to read your take on Erotica....lol
To all the following hubbers who graciously left me a comment I want to thank you, I didn't expect such a turnout for this erotic/romantic scribe. I guess like they say sex sells:-) Much appreciated comments from.
Becky Katz,
drbj,
always exploring,
dotty1,
thepinkumbrella,
Flora,
thebluestar,
Eiddwen,50Caliber,Mega1,
Cardisa,Highvoltagewriter,
ArnaTainted,
realhousewife,LadyTenaz,
Moviemaster.
Simply irresistable...bravo, this is sensual, seductive, and completely on fire!!! Hot!!!
"Just tell me"
"can you come and play"
"In the space of our love"
don't "bring in the clown"
('cause three's a crowd ;)
"Breathing you" Ambrosia
of "Sweet temptation",
elicit emotions of illicit affairs
What lies hidden behind
those dark tempestuous
"Enchantress" eyes?
that men can be turn into fools,
"Jumping into the erotic wave"
for "One summer night's passion"
Dear saddle and the erotic mystery woman,
A seamless duet, hardly tame and smouldering with possibilities... This genre really would be a fun contest but everyone would have to win-- all so different and wonderfully styled.
Voted UP & AB-- excuse me,time for a ciggie (LOL), mar.
Oh boy, Saddle, this is sizzling, so many sensual visuals, back and forth, man, woman, man, woman, building beautifully to the ulimate release when the ship docks in the harbour!!! All I can say is - Oh let it rain, let it rain, let it rain.
All my votes!!!
"Breathing You" is such a Steamy, Sensual, read, Saddlerider. It could only be written by two people totally insync and so full of desire for the other. Thanks for Sharing this totally Hot Hub! Voted way UP!
Beautiful,sensual and beautifully written. What more can I say? Voted Up and Sensual, oh I mean Beautiful.
@Saddlerider1: While I have indeed penned my fair share of intensely romantic, steamy sensual "Erotica", Ken, that is and shall remain only for my lady who is truly my greatest inspiration. Yes even now after over 35 years of knowing my precious and 28years of marriage She is the focus of my complete & total undying love, my friend.
Hers are the only, most exquisitely set gems of darkest chocolate, to scan my carefully chosen heartfelt words of Amore. So Intensely sensuous does she appear, to my soon rapidly beating heart, that she, with her piercing gaze, literally ignites these flames of Celtic passion within me, as they smoulder like burning coals, as she is reading each verse, with her deepest desires whispering behind those incredibly deep brown limpid pools, framed in their perfect almond shaped settings.
Where were we? Oh!! Yes I remember now, Ken! No, Sir, I'm afraid on that topic I must decline in placing an entry here on Hubpages for public scrutiny. LOL!! Thanks for the vote of confidence in my ability though, my friend!
Regards Mike(Aka Professor M!) ;D
SilentRedd how brilliant a scribe, simply amazing. Loved how you put it all together, what a wonderful idea. Much appreciate your talent and gift. peace my brother.
@marcjour, your so right, everyone is a winner in this challenge. I loved your comment, thank you for shareing this with me. Hugs
@Fennelseed, sizziling, I had to have it rain to put out the fire between us. LoL. thank you sweet lady for the lovely comment.
@b.malin your so correct, there is nothing better than two hearts in sync, when they are, there is nothing in this world that can feel any better.
@Pam, thank you for the read and sending it Up with beautiful words.
AKA Professor Mike, I totally respect your decline of wanting to add your touch of erotica/romance in a hub poetic form. I thank you though for sharing your most eloquent loving words about the relationship between the love of your life, your beautiful soul mate and twin, your wife.
One can't say enough about finding the love of our life and staying united for the rest of our lives together, nothing sweeter than seeing two eighty year olds walking holding hands into the sunset. I loved the "Notebook" the ending was divine. Mike in the rendition you gave here, there is not need for you to write a hub about romance or for that matter erotics.
Sir, what you left here on my page was absolutely stunningly beautiful, you melted this saddle's heart with your tender words for your wife. Blessings to you and yours, may you walk in that sunset together.
This is as sensual as sensual can be. Bravo. It's getting hot in herrE! haha very passionate, some fires burn so good.
Vinaya, thank you for enjoying this little piece of erotica. LoL
@Nikki, is it time for a cold shower, yes some fires really set us a glow with passion. Hugs
Another great poem by you Saddlerider1. I am sensing the new theme. Why not. Votes up.
Dear Ken,
As you know my friend I am suppose to be taking a break this week and catchin up on some things but as you can see I could not stay away this morning and so glad I stopped by....WOW this was beautiful in everyway..Full of passion..your words flowed like a sweet song..
Sunnie
Maggie May thank you for your on fire comment. Happy you liked it. Hugs
@thelyricwriter, thank you for the compliment of "great poem" and the votes Up. Much appreciated.
@Sunnie Day Hey what are you doing peaking out from your break:0)) naughty, naughty. LoL. I was singing a song when I thought of this one and it just flowed from me. Thank you my sweet lady for your kind words, now go back to your resting up and taking a break. Hugs.
What a great poem and what a surprize (not really, I know how versatile you are, dear Ken). Happy to see there is a less dark side of you that still operates beautifuly in the darkness of a passionate night LOL
Yes there is a less dark side to this poet. For if there was only dark in my life, it would not be worth living. I have been blessed with both and I share the lighter side through this challenge set upon my soul, thus I scribed this romantic side of me.LoL..the night brings out the sensuality in me. Hugs from me to you sweet friend.
Ahhhh yesss. When two become as one; delectable and mesmerizing secrets shared when age becomes constant amidst the eternal promise and feel of love and desire. These words flow and meld so beautifully. Kudos to you, Ken, and the lovely mystery woman. :-)
Where is the cold shower disclaimer?
This might not be your realm, but you throw your imagination into this topic with that same Rider vigor. Now I'm wondering if we know the female counterpart... or, if she was just a shade of your imagination...
Ken, I had the Righteous Bros. song "Ebb Tide" playing through my head as I read this beautiful verse. Like the song it starts easy at low tide and builds to the crescendo of tide's peak with the waves playing higher and higher upon the sands. Charlie Campbell (ralwus) would be mighty proud! WB
GennaEast so nice to see you again, where have you been? Age becomes constant amidst the eternal promise and feel of love and desire. You know I love flow:-) Thank you for the always lovely and heart warming comment, when are you coming back to grace us with your beautiful words? Hurry please.
@Doug Turner Jr, you to, where have you been? I know you've run off and gotten yourself hooked, but Dude, you have to come up for air and get yourself out from under those satin sheets and away from your sweethearts grip on your loins:0) Your correct it's not my realm by a long shot, however a group of friends raised the bar and presented me with an interesting challenge and this is what came of it. I will leave the shady lady mystery to everyone's imagination:-) is she real or just a figment. LoL
@Wayne howdy brother. Now that is an appropriate tune to be playing whilst reading this piece for sure, good choice. The waves were sure crashing and bashing about the shore when they finally hit their peak. And oh what a peak it was in the rain:-).... Yes I think this piece would be right up Charlies alley..
Reading this is like watching a beautiful, sensual dance - absolutely sensational, Ken!
I am so glad you enjoyed it Shalini, so nice to see you back, it's been awhile:0) Missed you.
Absolutely beautiful! I love how you have the two views of the same experience play out. Very sexy piece. Voted up! :D
Thank you Daniella for your beautiful comment. I felt it would be fun to include my opposite, she did a fine job and I thanked her for it.
Ahem, anyone have a cigarette? JK:) Great poetry!
Glad you liked it, I'd offer you a smoke but that's one vice I don't have, would you care for a glass of wine instead?:-)
So many beautiful elements - this is sultry! I'm actually speechless!
@PhoenixV I just might take up smoking after this one! @saddlerider make mine a merlot
;)
Wow what a challenge and what a result. This was so sensual and simply stunning, amazing Saddlerider and I am totally in love with your words - as always!
missolive, I am happy to read it made you speechless, then I have accomplished something here:0) hugs
@PhonenixV I love Merlot as well, I toast to thee, thank you for the visit. Hugs
@acaetnna my love goddess. I thought you of all people would love this one, I am also in love with your words, you know the meaning of LOVE to well...hugs
OK saddle not cool-that was so HOT! I just wasn't expecting such sensuality from a horse back rider LOL Dude that was over the top and I'm ..................... I love you did this and your talents continue to widen, heighten, ripen, grow, and definitely shock this reader for sure. Love Ya
Kimberly
ps- I didn't say any of this because your a judge HA
Aw but Kim my sweet friend, horse back riders have erotica between their loins, it's all that leather rubbing against their denim:-) I enjoyed writing this piece, it was a challenge asked of me and I took it up and over the top. And yes here come da judge...lol...looking forward to seeing some of your great scribes entered in the contest next month. You are talented beyond talent and have a voice, so work your magic girl and show us more of your great stuff. Hugs
Saddle you said loins :-O
LOL
Saddle I did forget to mention this piece truly was over the top, glad you took on the challenge and way to go!
wow wow and wow. You've done someting wonderful with this one. I am so glad you took the challenge to write this.
I enjoy the back and forth... very passionate and involving. Keep at it!
Hi, Hold on got to wipe the pc screen got a bit foggy there, yep thats it got it! lol seriously, great poem, and very hot! ha ha
Thank you for the visit and comment JaxonVast, much appreciated.
Nell, so you thought it was a little steamy did you?;-) the way we like it HOT, sweaty and sensual. LoL thanks for the read and comment my friend.
You take my breath into your own
and hold my fragrance in your hand
Seeking sweeter, fiercer nectar
I am lost in you.
my favorite part! :)
Rebecca, thank you for the wow, wow and wow, glad you enjoyed it. hugs
@HattieMattieMae thank you for adding your favorite part, glad you enjoyed this, your poetry is magnificent and brilliant as well. Hugs
Dear erotic/romantic scribe, WOW! This is hot!!!
Great expressions of sensuality. Awesome!
Saddlerider (and lady of mystery)
Generally speaking...I would say get a room...but I think you already did...you were just that in tune...
Excellent job!
Thomas
Phyllis I am happy you liked this erotic piece. I had to open a window and let some cool air in to this hot room of mine. LoL.
@ThoughtSandwiches, Yes my new friend, the room I already have, steamy as it was, it was a delightful treat making it even more steamier. Thank you Thomas for your keen words.
As ever.... Superb.
Thank you sir, much appreciated.
"I feel you tremble like the earth
and tear apart in tender madness
my touch is yours
my mouth is yours
my breath is yours."
Breathtakingly beautiful, passionate and romantic.
Voted up, up and away!
Thank you Sueswan for the voted Up and away. This was an exciting and stimulating piece to write.
Gorgeously passionate and romantic.
It's a good thing no one was around me as I read it. I was blushing. Voted up and awesome! ;)
Thank you Tom for your passionate and romantic comment:-)
@septembergirl, I would like to have seen your blushing face to. lol thanks for the read my friend, glad you enjoyed it.
Ken we just read this together, where Ragnar read the male's perspective and I read the female perspective. I can clearly say I am speechless.
Nice work you two, saddlerider1! Qudsia and I just read this together :-p beautiful.
Thank you Qudsia and ragnarsj for both taking part in this read, I bet after you both read this piece you wished you were together? It's so hard being apart when passion is so deep and one can't reach out and physically touch each others hearts.
One day soon I pray you both unite and then the stars will twinkle brighter in the heavens and the earth will stand still for one second in time while you both endorse your love for on another holding and hugging closely. Peace to you....
Fantastic title - had to come and see this one, too. An amazing work of scribing, my friend - dark and sultry, like finely aged wine. Nicely done!
Thank you RedElf, glad you liked it. Yes I love finely aged wine when I scribe, maybe a bit to much at times writing like this:-) Hugs
swimming in your dusk and dreams
unlacing where my body ends
and yours begins
Just gorgeous writing! The lyricism and flow are wonderful--and I am a big one for word choice--You make me want to put my best work on here----I was drawn to the title and loved the piece. Look forward to reading more of your work---
I continue to move through Tom's cento and discover poets like you. Your voice to me was like a husky Sean Connery. When you wrote Casablanca, it all came together for me: character, place, moment. I learned a great deal from your writing of this poem. Now I have a new goal for my poetry. Thanks so much.
OH MY!!! I got some serious tingles reading this... so amazingly well written.. it captured the feeling of all involved, including the reader. I may have to read this again. I'm impressed by the both of you. HOT!HOT!HOT!!
swimming in your dusk and dreams
unlacing where my body ends
and yours begins
Just beautiful writing!
Audrey I see I missed a few comments here, they were all so eloquent and yours I savored with a glass of my favorite red wine. I am honored that my work has moved you to put some of your best works on here. I commented on one today, your choice of composers was breath taking, he is one of my favorites and inspires my soul to scribe. Thank you my friend for your appreciation of my work. Hugs
Yes, yes, yes the poem is very nice, but what do you propose to do about the Beard Rash all over my sister's face... you dirty,dirty beast!???? Where is the Hose?
I must try to write as seductively as this! There Must be some advantage in being clean shaven Mr Saddlerider!
Ouch! I can't continue to the end of lines. Need to find husband first, ASAP! lol. This is too hot, Sir! :D
Pearldiver, there would be no beard rash as I didn't have one when I penned this piece, however today is a different story, I have my beard back, I shaved it off especially to be gentle on this fair damsel. Now prey tell may I ask what you want to do with that hose? LoL Oh my friend you can write just as deductively as this, I've read your work, you don't fool the Saddle:-) Thank you for your fine words.
@Freya, so nice to see you, where have you been? Our mutual dear friend Micky has left us and I am saddened by it, he was such a contributor here at the hubs with his magnificent work. Yes I know what you mean, I nearly could not finish this scribe myself, had to go take a cold shower a few times to. LoL Thank you for your words. hugs.
Sizzle, Sizzle. The bacon fat hits the hot iron campfire pan and the cowboy straddles his saddle. You took us all for a ride with this one Ken. Merry Christmas and a healthy prosperous New Year.
Thank you Gerry, I thought I'd heat up the campfire with a little sizzle as you call it:-) Merry Christmas to you my poet friend and a blessed and Happy New Year. Peace and blessings I send to you from the saddle.
This was a masterwork for a first attempt in this genre. All the best. Gerry
Your POEM is so wonderful and sensual.. made me sit straight up..LOL.. what can I say I LOVE IT.. I want to read more.
I voted up and beautiful
Happy new Year
Thank you Gerry and Happy New Year to you my poetic friend. I took a dive into the deep end of sensuality and came up with this one, glad you liked it, your right it's not my usual genre. LoL
@Deborah Thank you for your vote up and beautiful, glad it made you sit at attention, LoL and that you loved it to. Hugs
Pushed the right buttons again. Best wishes for a happy, healthy, prosperous and creative New Year, Ken.
How did I miss this one my Irish friend and fellow poet. Yes indeed and a Happy New Year and creative one at that for you to kind sir.
YES! Awesome work. I LOVE the passion in this. Very compelling poem and visual. You took me to another place.
Thank you for your Awesome comment. Happy to have taken you to another place my poetic friend.
You're very welcome, but on the contrary, thank YOU. So happy to see that passion thrives within any other human being the way I feel it. It's a beautiful yet exciting--and unbridled feeling! But God made sex and love...so no wonder it's SO AWESOME.
You are absolutely spot on. Sex and love are twins, they must stay together in harmony. One without the other is like having a rose without thorns. Your work is awesome, I see you are a very passionate woman indeed, never lose it.
Vincent. . . thank you for this very stimulating "HOT" read, to say the least, whew!! LOL! You sure have a lot of passion and sensuality hidden inside you. Just gorgeous! Reading you beautiful words felt like warm honey caressing my mind and body. Loved it!! Hugs to you.
SanneL at times it takes two like minded people to stimulate senses together. In this case a friend came to add her own personal touch to this piece. She did a marvelous job of adding her sensual touch to the creation. I am happy you liked it, yes indeed honey caressing ones mind and body would suit the occasion. Hubs right back at ya.xo
Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago
Very impressive! Your poem is screaming sensuality! The lady of mystery is a clever idea. You both got my votes!!!